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Apr 2Liked by Neo Kim

Love your posts but imho, you use too many short sentences, it really takes me as a reader out of the narrative thought sometimes.

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I see, I need to find a balance between making sentences simpler but not too short.

Thanks for your feedback, Daniel. I'll try to improve my writing skills - still working on it.

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